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Anonymous asked: Malik and Oma

Malik

Malik is a knight of the royal guard. He grew up in Aria(the West village) to a seamstress and fisherman who had higher hopes for him. Although he grew up in the main village he was painfully aware of all the impoverished families that populated the lakeside and how quickly he could end up there. 

At the age of thirteen, later than some, he managed to save enough coin to leave his family and begin training under the Arian Guard. He quickly made a name for himself and by 16 he was leaving for Ceria City to join the royal guard and train under the king. 

He met Denemeer when he was ten and sold her a small, ugly fish at market, they got reacquainted with her when he began training under her father, and by the time he had turned 21 they were much more than friends. He hates it when she’s in his head but she never does it without his permission and always respects his wants and wishes. In return he does the same for her, even when it comes to allowing her to ride with the guard and fight battles he fears might end her.

Oma

Leader of the Mortars in the Fiery Mountains across the river from the kingdom of Ceria, Oma is not a kind or cruel queen. She keeps her people divided, barely keeping the potential uprising at bay. The darker, tar skinned, hairless Mortars are left to the Red Desert and lower mountains while the red skinned Mortars perch upon the mountain tops and look down on them. 

Oma made her peace with the Cerians when the mother of Melorie first came to them offering gifts; strange woods, gems, skins of creatures that dared not come near their homes, things the Mortars could not get for themselves. For this she agreed to give them no trouble, but she never agreed to open trades with them, her neutrality extending beyond her own kingdom. There are many Cerians who take asylum in her desert, but she knows most die within a week of entering it’s terrible stormy terrain, their blood feeding it’s red sands. 

Her hands are clean of the Cerian mess. Her husband, Tar, on the other hand seems to have a strange obsession with the fleshy creatures.

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Anonymous asked: denemeer. I don't know what it is but its sounds cool :)

Denemeer is the great granddaughter of Melorie (she’s introduced here, in the prologue to the first part of my story, click the first read more first then read the rest).

Denemeer has grown up in very peaceful times, she doesn’t know much about war or strife, just that her great grandmother ended an uprising and secured their position as queens of the kingdom. But Denemeer doesn’t like the whole princess thing, well, it’s not so bad, but she hates sitting in the palace library and being prepared for the throne. Her real passion is fighting. Her father is not just the king but also the head of the Royal Guard, her real want is to follow in his footsteps. 

She also struggles with the gift Mother Universe has bestowed upon her; the ability to read minds, and generally find her way into peoples thoughts. It took her years to hone this skill, to keep herself from inadvertently wandering into peoples heads and scaring them away.

Denemeer’s world changes drastically throughout the story when old rivalries reappear.

if you’ve got any more specific questions I’d love to say more about her :)

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Ask me questions about my characters! I feel like expanding on who they are. Just send an ask about my protags, antags, or secondaries :)

Protags:
Denemeer

Antags:
Crest

Secondary:
Uma
Dalek
Malik
Arc
Lizbeth
Oma
Tar
Taya

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Melorie at the Prison:

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This is only about the first page of my new draft. I plan on not posting anything from it for a long long time so this is probably the only sample you guys will see for now. It’s going to be the start of the prologue, the characters involved here are not the main ones and only related to the main ones.

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Whoops I lied, here’s the rest of the prologue: 

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✶ DAILY CHARACTER QUESTION ✶

A Different Chain
Pick one of your secondary characters.
What is the one secret this character would never tell the Protagonist/Antagonist, and why?

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Secondary character to antagonist:
Arc would never tell Crest that over the years he’s grown scared and completely incapable of loving him. Their friendship was built on how alone they both felt but now Arc feels even more alone when he’s around Crest. His obsession with the throne and his treatment of Arc’s sister have shown Arc that Crest is not the person he thought he was.

maxkirin:

✶ DAILY CHARACTER QUESTION ✶

A Different Chain

Pick one of your secondary characters.

What is the one secret this character would never tell the Protagonist/Antagonist, and why?

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Secondary character to antagonist:

Arc would never tell Crest that over the years he’s grown scared and completely incapable of loving him. Their friendship was built on how alone they both felt but now Arc feels even more alone when he’s around Crest. His obsession with the throne and his treatment of Arc’s sister have shown Arc that Crest is not the person he thought he was.

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The races that exist in my book:

  • Cerians (aka; Children of Simera)
  • Daughters of Aneta (Same as Cerians, except the females carry a ‘special’ ability. The trait is carried by mothers and passed to their daughters.)
  • Sons of Sera (Same as Cerians, except males carry a ‘special’ ability. The trait is carried in fathers and passed to their sons.)
  • Mortars 
  • Mosolb
  • Diamrem; aquatic and amphibious
  • Matryarcs
  • Nohtyps

I don’t feel like going into details with them but I will attempt to draw up drafts of what they look like (I’ve already done so for the Mortars and Diamrem a few times).

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Melorie at the Prison:

debracomposed:

This is only about the first page of my new draft. I plan on not posting anything from it for a long long time so this is probably the only sample you guys will see for now. It’s going to be the start of the prologue, the characters involved here are not the main ones and only related to the main ones.

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